Ayushi Jain
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Ayushi Jain commented on the post, Perplexity 4 months, 1 week ago
Hey author! I checked out your story “Perplexity” and wow, it really captured the struggles of unexpressed emotions in just one line. It beautifully conveyed the agony and frustration of not being able to communicate our feelings, and the relief that comes from finding someone who understands our unsaid words. It reminded me of how powerful…[Read more]
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Ayushi Jain commented on the post, "Colorful Adventures" 4 months, 1 week ago
It was a captivating and imaginative journey. The concept of a world where imagination shapes reality was cool, and I loved how Ava’s character embodied curiosity and adventure. The descriptions were vivid, painting a clear picture of the vibrant landscapes. The theme of companionship added depth, and your writing style was elegant and engaging.…[Read more]
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Ayushi Jain wrote a new post 4 months, 1 week ago
Dreamweaver's SymphonyIn a world where dreams were no longer fleeting echoes of the subconscious, but instead, malleable realms waiting to be shaped, there lived a person named Maya. Maya possessed a rare and extraordinary gift—she had t…
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Ayushi Jain commented on the post, The Lost Labyrinth 4 months, 1 week ago
This story takes us on an exhilarating journey through the depths of the forgotten labyrinth of Kismetia. Elena, a determined and courageous scholar, embarks on a quest to unravel the mysteries of the maze. The vivid descriptions of the labyrinth’s challenges and Elena’s unwavering spirit make for an engaging read. The climax of the story, where…[Read more]
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Ayushi Jain commented on the post, Road to Destiny 4 months, 1 week ago
This story takes us on an exciting road trip with a group of friends who yearn for something beyond their familiar town. The author effectively captures the sense of adventure and the mix of emotions that the characters experience as they embark on their journey. The vivid descriptions of the landscapes, cities, and encounters with diverse…[Read more]
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Ayushi Jain wrote a new post 4 months, 1 week ago
Unseen BrillianceIn a world where extraordinary abilities were the norm, there lived a young person named Alex. Unlike their peers, Alex possessed no discernible superpower, rendering them an outcast in a society that celebrated…
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Ayushi Jain commented on the post, The Haunting Shadows 4 months, 1 week ago
“The Haunting Shadows” on Storieo is a captivating and well-crafted horror story that keeps readers on the edge of their seats. The author skillfully builds an atmosphere of suspense and terror, immersing the reader in a world of malevolent spirits and dark secrets. The characters, particularly Sarah, are well-developed and their emotions and…[Read more]
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Ayushi Jain commented on the post, Friendship : The Rainbow of Life 4 months, 1 week ago
The story “Friendship: The Rainbow of Life” is a heartwarming tale that emphasizes the value of true friendship. The narrative revolves around seven friends who share a deep and enduring bond, which is quite rare in today’s self-centered society. The friends gather in a park and have a conversation about their favorite colors, each explaining the…[Read more]
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Ayushi Jain wrote a new post 4 months, 1 week ago
Reflections of ObsessionEthan found himself captivated by this remarkable power in a society blessed with the extraordinary ability to change their appearance at will. The world around him was a canvas, and he reveled in the freedom to mold…
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Ayushi Jain commented on the post, Am I supposed to? 4 months, 1 week ago
The question you posed about why we love people we’re not “supposed” to love is so relatable and thought-provoking. Your writing style is eloquent and captivating, drawing me in from the very beginning. I loved how you explored the complexities of human emotions and the conflicts that arise when our hearts go against societal norms. Your…[Read more]
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Ayushi Jain commented on the post, The Greenheart's Bond 4 months, 1 week ago
Hey author! I just finished reading your story “The Greenheart’s Bond,” and I have to say it was enchanting. The way you portrayed Ethan’s ability to communicate with plants was captivating, and it made me feel a deep connection with nature. I loved how Ethan used his gift to advocate for sustainable living and inspire others to protect the…[Read more]
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Ayushi Jain wrote a new post 4 months, 1 week ago
Shadows of DestinyIn a small, peaceful town nestled amidst rolling hills, lived a man named Ethan. One ordinary morning, Ethan awoke to find his world forever changed. As he rubbed his eyes, he realized that he had been granted an…
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Ayushi Jain commented on the post, Lunar Bond 4 months, 1 week ago
I was hooked from the beginning by the unique world you created and the strong bond between Keira and Lucas. The Lunar Ascendancy ball added a touch of elegance, and the encounter with Alexander brought in some intense conflict. The climax where Lucas stood up for Keira was powerful and showed their deep connection. The story had a great blend of…[Read more]
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Ayushi Jain commented on the post, Mini: Part-2 4 months, 1 week ago
Hey author! I just finished reading “Mini: Part-2” and I have to say, it’s a heartwarming and emotional story. I was touched by Mini’s journey from being skeptical and guarded to gradually opening up to love and acceptance. The bond between Mini, Simmi, and the Saxena couple is beautifully portrayed, highlighting the power of compassion and…[Read more]
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Ayushi Jain wrote a new post 4 months, 1 week ago
Beneath the Azure DepthsIn the coastal town of Portville, nestled by the vast ocean, lived a curious and adventurous young woman named Lily. Unlike most people in her town, Lily had always felt a magnetic pull towards the sea. She spent her…
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Ayushi Jain commented on the post, Namaste Inc.: How Yoga went Global 4 months, 2 weeks ago
The story “Namaste Inc.: How Yoga went Global” had me laughing out loud! It’s a hilarious take on the collision between yoga and globalization. I couldn’t help but chuckle at the image of employees from around the world attempting complex yoga poses and ending up twisted like pretzels. The way you described the viral disaster and the memes that…[Read more]
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Ayushi Jain commented on the post, The Business Man 4 months, 2 weeks ago
It’s a gripping tale of ambition and resilience, showcasing the journey of Daniel from a small town to becoming a successful business leader. Your writing skillfully portrays the challenges he faced and the lessons he learned along the way. I particularly loved how you highlighted the importance of hard work, determination, and surrounding oneself…[Read more]
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Ayushi Jain wrote a new post 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Reflections of ShadowsIn the bustling metropolis of Veridion, where advanced technology and limitless possibilities merged, a remarkable phenomenon emerged—a breakthrough that granted individuals the power to alter their appearance at w…
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Ayushi Jain commented on the post, Petals of Trust 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I just finished reading your story, “Petals of Trust”. It was absolutely beautiful! The way you painted the picture of the magical garden and the bond between Alka and her grandpa was so vivid and heartwarming. The symbolism of the pink rose and the act of surrendering its petals was a powerful metaphor for trust and letting go. Your storytelling…[Read more]
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Ayushi Jain commented on the post, SEASON OF MURDERS – A DEADLY LOVE 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I recently finished reading your story, “Season of Murders – A Deadly Love,” and I have to say, it was absolutely captivating! The way you expertly blended elements of love, darkness, and suspense had me hooked from start to finish. I found the characters of Ishaan and Taniya to be intriguing, and their internal struggle between duty and desire…[Read more]
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