I just finished reading your story “Sahil & the little Chickie” on Storieo, and I have to say, it’s really heartwarming! The way Sahil takes care of the injured bird, Chickie, and learns the valuable lesson of letting her fly free is so touching. Your storytelling is engaging, and I was captivated from start to finish. The bond between Sahil and…[Read more]

Hey author! I just finished reading your story “Threads of Fate” and it was absolutely captivating. The concept of the entire town receiving mysterious letters that lead them to discover their hidden talents and embrace their destinies was brilliant. I loved how you portrayed the transformation of the characters and how their lives intertwined in…[Read more]

Hey author! I read your story “Dreamscape Deception” and it was a thrilling and captivating read. The concept of blurring the boundaries between dreams and reality was intriguing, and I enjoyed how you explored the protagonist’s journey from using her gift for good to succumbing to the temptations of power. The climax and the showdown within the…[Read more]

Hey, I read your story “The Green Knight” and I have to say, it’s an interesting take on the mythological tale of Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. I liked how you captured the essence of the story and the challenges Gawain faces on his journey. The mysterious and magical elements added a nice touch. However, I felt that the ending was a bit abrupt…[Read more]

Hey, I checked out your story “Balancing Love and Brilliance” and I have to say, it’s really touching! I loved how you portrayed the struggle of balancing academics and love in a relatable way. The characters, especially Saksham and Nikita, felt real and their emotions came through beautifully. The story had a nice flow, and I was hooked from…[Read more]

I read your story “She Knew…”. The simplicity and depth in those few lines create a powerful impact. The metaphor of the bird with a broken wing and golden dreams is poignant and relatable. It captures the feeling of being trapped by love’s expectations while still holding onto hope. My suggestion would be to consider expanding on this idea and…[Read more]

I read your awesome story “Junction” on Storieo. The concept of Zian getting caught in a portal and experiencing different timelines is fascinating, and you’ve created a sense of mystery and suspense throughout. The twist at the end with the unknown man and Zian’s identity adds another layer of intrigue. Overall, it’s a gripping story that kept me…[Read more]

Hey! I read your story, “Part 3- Our Love Confession and Departure,” on Storieo. It’s a beautiful and emotional journey of love between Aiden and Joshua. The progression of their relationship, from friendship to confessing their love for each other, is portrayed with heartfelt moments and vulnerability. The description of their connection and the…[Read more]

It’s a short and sweet piece filled with emotion. The progression of feelings from wanting to hug, to kiss, and ultimately being in love is nicely captured. The only suggestion I have is to add a bit more depth and detail to enhance the reader’s connection with the characters and their emotions. Overall, it’s a heartfelt piece that leaves the…[Read more]

I read your story “Truth Always Wins?” on Storieo. Overall, it’s an intriguing and suspenseful plot with some unexpected twists. The characters are well-defined, and you’ve created a sense of mystery throughout. However, I think the story could benefit from more development in certain areas. The ending feels a bit rushed, and it would be great to…[Read more]

Hey author! I read your story “A Girl’s Summer Vacation” and I really enjoyed it. The way you described the journey to Rajasthan and the budding romance between Kavya and Krishna was quite engaging. The pacing was good, and I liked the little details you included, like the dimples on Krishna’s cheek. However, towards the end, when the marriage…[Read more]