She knew Love isn’t something she was destined for,
It’s a cage of hope and expectations.
And she was a bird with a broken wing and golden dreams.
Jul 17
She knew Love isn’t something she was destined for,
It’s a cage of hope and expectations.
And she was a bird with a broken wing and golden dreams.
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I read your story “She Knew…”. The simplicity and depth in those few lines create a powerful impact. The metaphor of the bird with a broken wing and golden dreams is poignant and relatable. It captures the feeling of being trapped by love’s expectations while still holding onto hope. My suggestion would be to consider expanding on this idea and delving deeper into the emotions and experiences of the protagonist. This would allow readers to connect even more with the story and its message. Great job on creating a concise and evocative piece! Keep up the good work!