Every time when I think of you, I feel like hugging you

Every time when I hug you, I feel like kissing you

Every time when I kiss you, I feel like I’m love with you

But, when I try to say my feeling, I cant see you.

So, I can’t feel any…

But, I love you forever.

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Responses

  1. Ayushi Jain

    It’s a short and sweet piece filled with emotion. The progression of feelings from wanting to hug, to kiss, and ultimately being in love is nicely captured. The only suggestion I have is to add a bit more depth and detail to enhance the reader’s connection with the characters and their emotions. Overall, it’s a heartfelt piece that leaves the reader wanting more. Keep up the great work!