Shivanshu Giri
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Shivanshu Giri recommended the post Relentless and Forever 11 months ago
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Shivanshu Giri wrote a new post 11 months ago
The Platform On the foggy winter night of December 31, a 5’7″ athletic man wearing a peach hoodie and blue pants holds his black American travel suitcase and blue suitcase. Drenched in sweat, he ran to himself. train whi…
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Hey author, I checked out your story “Relentless and Forever” on Storieo. The plot revolves around a chance encounter between two characters on a train platform. The descriptions and emotions are well-captured, and the symbolism adds depth. However, there are some grammar and language issues that need improvement. The conversations could use more depth and natural flow. Overall, it’s an intriguing story, but work on refining your language and character development. Keep writing and polishing your skills!
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