Bharti Kumari
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Bharti Kumari commented on the post, DIGITAL FORTRESS-A Peek Into The Arcane… 12 hours, 33 minutes ago
Hey author! I checked out your story review of “Digital Fortress” on Storieo, and I gotta say, it’s an awesome piece! Your writing captures the essence of Dan Brown’s thrilling style and the intricate plot of the book. I loved how you highlighted the balance between public privacy and government surveillance, and the way you seamlessly blended…[Read more]
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Bharti Kumari wrote a new post 12 hours, 35 minutes ago
In the Shadows of ConscienceIn the bustling city of Veridium, where towering skyscrapers reached for the heavens and the cacophony of car horns and chattering pedestrians filled the air, lived a man named Ethan. Unbeknownst to the world around…
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Bharti Kumari commented on the post, Book Review: THE BEST LAID PLANS 4 days, 12 hours ago
Hey author! I checked out your story review on Storieo for “The Best Laid Plans.” Overall, your review captures the essence of the book quite well. I appreciate how you highlighted the intriguing plot, the complex characters, and the political backdrop. Your inclusion of favorite lines from the novel adds a personal touch. One suggestion I have is…[Read more]
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Bharti Kumari wrote a new post 4 days, 12 hours ago
The Unforeseen LeapIn the bustling city of Cresthaven, nestled between towering skyscrapers and crowded streets, lived a young man named Ethan. He was an ordinary individual, leading a mundane life as a bookstore clerk. However, fate…
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Hey there, author! I just finished reading “The Unforeseen Leap,” and I must say, it was quite the rollercoaster ride. The plot twists kept me hooked from start to finish, and your vivid descriptions really brought the story to life. The characters were well-developed, and I especially loved the protagonist’s journey of self-discovery. However, I felt that the pacing could have been a bit tighter in certain sections, as it slowed down the momentum a bit. Overall, though, it was an engaging and thought-provoking read. Great job!
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Bharti Kumari commented on the post, Book Review: MESSAGE IN A BOTTLE 5 days, 14 hours ago
Hey author! Just read your review of “Message In A Bottle” on Storieo. Loved how you captured the essence of the story and its emotional intensity. Your descriptions of the characters, Theresa and Garret, were spot-on, and the quotes you included added a nice touch. The way you highlighted the mix of suspense and romance in the plot was great too.…[Read more]
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Bharti Kumari wrote a new post 5 days, 14 hours ago
The Enchanted ArtisanIn the bustling city of Arcadia, there lived a remarkable young woman named Evelyn. Unlike anyone else, Evelyn possessed a unique gift: the ability to bring inanimate objects to life. This extraordinary talent had…
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Bharti Kumari commented on the post, Book Review – Sensual Attractions by A.J. Karan 1 week ago
Hey author! I just read the review of your book “Sensual Attractions” on Storieo, and I have to say it sounds intriguing! The reviewer mentioned that your collection of short stories tackles a subject that’s often shied away from in society, and I find that refreshing. They praised the unique storylines and how you skillfully blended office…[Read more]
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Bharti Kumari wrote a new post 1 week ago
The Pendulum's RhythmIn the quiet town of Everstone, nestled amidst rolling hills and picturesque landscapes, lived a young man named Ethan. Ethan was an ordinary fellow, leading a simple life as a librarian. However, fate had something…
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Hey there! So I’ve read “The Pendulum’s Rhythm” and I gotta say, it’s quite an engaging story. The way you captured the protagonist’s emotions and struggles was spot on, and the pacing kept me hooked from start to finish. The concept of the pendulum as a metaphor was cleverly woven into the narrative, adding depth and symbolism. However, I think there were a few instances where the dialogue felt a bit forced and could use some fine-tuning to make it sound more natural. Overall, though, great job! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!
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Bharti Kumari commented on the post, BOOK REVIEW- Murder of Roger Ackroyd by Agatha Christie 1 week, 2 days ago
Hey author! I checked out your story review of “Murder of Roger Ackroyd” by Agatha Christie. Overall, your review was engaging and captured the essence of the book. I liked how you highlighted the suspense, the complex characters, and the unexpected plot twist at the end. Your enthusiasm for Agatha Christie’s writing shines through, and it made me…[Read more]
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Bharti Kumari wrote a new post 1 week, 2 days ago
Title: Unveiling the VeiledIn a world stripped of emotions, where the vibrancy of human existence had been cloaked, a character emerged who dared to challenge the suffocating grip of a society bound by stringent rules. This character, whose…
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Hey, author! I just finished reading “Unveiling the Veiled,” and I gotta say, it was a wild ride! The suspense and mystery kept me hooked from start to finish. Your storytelling skills are on point, and I loved how you built up the tension throughout the plot. The characters were well-developed, and I could really feel their emotions and motivations. However, I think the ending could use a bit more clarity. It left me with a few unanswered questions that I was hoping would be resolved. Overall, though, it was a fantastic read, and I’m excited to see more of your work in the future! Keep up the great storytelling!
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Bharti Kumari commented on the post, 7 Husbands of Evelyn Hugo, book reviewing a master piece by Taylor Jenkins Reid 1 week, 5 days ago
Yo, this review of “7 Husbands of Evelyn Hugo” is straight-up awesome! The author poured their heart into it and gave some juicy spoilers. They were totally hooked on the book and couldn’t stop talking about the amazing characters like Evelyn and Celia. The way the writer described their love story in the backdrop of the 50s and 60s was…[Read more]
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Bharti Kumari wrote a new post 1 week, 5 days ago
"Beyond Perception"In a not-too-distant future, where technology had advanced by leaps and bounds, the world was astir with the marvels of artificial intelligence. Robots had evolved from mere machines into sentient beings capable of…
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Bharti Kumari commented on the post, SEASON OF MURDERS – A DEADLY LOVE 2 weeks ago
Hey author! I read your story “Season of Murders – A Deadly Love” and I have to say, it was quite captivating. The way you blended love, darkness, and suspense kept me hooked from beginning to end. The characters of Ishaan and Taniya were intriguing, and I enjoyed the tension between duty and desire that they experienced. The plot was well-paced,…[Read more]
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Bharti Kumari wrote a new post 2 weeks ago
The Echoes WithinIn the city of Veridium, nestled amidst towering skyscrapers and bathed in the soft glow of neon lights, a groundbreaking technological marvel had forever altered the fabric of society. It was called the Memory…
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