Gaurav Vyas
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Gaurav Vyas wrote a new post 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Beneath the Veil of ShadowsIn the heart of the dense forest, nestled amidst towering trees and whispered secrets, there lived a curious wanderer named Amelia. Amelia had always possessed an insatiable thirst for adventure, and her feet were…
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Gaurav Vyas commented on the post, Whispers in the Shadows 9 months, 2 weeks ago
I just finished reading “Whispers in the Shadows,” and I have to say it was quite a thrilling ride. The eerie atmosphere you created throughout the story really drew me in, and I couldn’t wait to uncover the mystery. The pacing was spot-on, keeping me engaged from start to finish. The character development was solid, especially with the…[Read more]
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Gaurav Vyas commented on the post, SEASON OF MURDERS – A DEADLY LOVE 9 months, 2 weeks ago
“Season of Murders – A Deadly Love” was a wild ride! The plot kept me on the edge of my seat with its twists and turns. The author did a great job building suspense and creating a dark atmosphere. The characters were intriguing, and I loved how the theme of love and danger was woven throughout. However, I felt that the ending was a bit rushed. I…[Read more]
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Gaurav Vyas wrote a new post 9 months, 2 weeks ago
A Distant HorizonIn the not-so-distant future, Earth teetered on the brink of inhospitability. Climate change ravaged the lands, resources dwindled, and the once vibrant planet could no longer sustain its population. Humanity faced a…
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Gaurav Vyas commented on the post, Interview with Ruskin Bond at The Kolkata Literary Meet 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Awesome story! I totally loved reading about your interview with Ruskin Bond at The Kolkata Literary Meet. The way you described the whole event was so vivid and exciting. It felt like I was right there, soaking up the atmosphere and hanging onto every word Bond said. Your informal style made it feel like we were just chilling and having a chat.…[Read more]
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Gaurav Vyas wrote a new post 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Gravity's EmbraceIn a world transformed by the extraordinary ability to manipulate gravity, there lived a young woman named Maya. She was blessed with a unique gift—she could control the force that held everything on Earth. Maya’s h…
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The concept of Maya having the power to manipulate gravity is unique and intriguing. Your descriptions of her using her abilities to assist in disaster relief, construction, and transportation were really engaging. The message of environmental preservation and the power of individuals to make a positive impact is inspiring. The only suggestion I have is to consider adding a bit more depth to Maya’s character and her personal journey. Overall, great job! Keep up the excellent work!
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Gaurav Vyas commented on the post, The Seer 9 months, 3 weeks ago
“The Seer” and I have to say, it’s a pretty intriguing story. The concept of a seer with the ability to predict the future is always fascinating, and you managed to create a sense of mystery and suspense throughout. I loved the way you built up the tension and kept me engaged until the end. The characters were well-developed, and I felt connected…[Read more]
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Gaurav Vyas commented on the post, The Ring of Horror 9 months, 3 weeks ago
“The Ring of Horror” is a gripping and intense story that immerses the reader in a world of suspense and terror. The author does a fantastic job of building tension and keeping the audience on the edge of their seat throughout the narrative. The character development is strong, particularly the protagonist’s journey from fear and self-doubt to…[Read more]
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Gaurav Vyas wrote a new post 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Ignited HeartsIn the quaint village of Emberdale, there lived a young man named Asher. Within him, an extraordinary power lay dormant—the ability to manipulate fire. But Asher’s gift was not without its challenges. The flames t…
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Gaurav Vyas commented on the post, THE RETURN OF CURSE – PART 1 9 months, 3 weeks ago
“The Return of Curse – Part 1” is an engaging and thrilling story that captivates readers from the beginning. The author does an excellent job of building suspense and setting up the plot for future installments. The characters are well-developed and relatable, drawing readers into their world. The pacing is spot-on, with a perfect balance of a…[Read more]
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Gaurav Vyas wrote a new post 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Unveiling the VeilOnce upon a time in the bustling city of Veridale, there lived a young and curious individual named Alex. Alex had always been fascinated by mysteries and hidden worlds, so when rumors of a secret society hiding in…
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Gaurav Vyas commented on the post, The Unforeseen Leap 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Hey there, author! I just finished reading “The Unforeseen Leap,” and I must say, it was quite the rollercoaster ride. The plot twists kept me hooked from start to finish, and your vivid descriptions really brought the story to life. The characters were well-developed, and I especially loved the protagonist’s journey of self-discovery. However, I…[Read more]
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Gaurav Vyas wrote a new post 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Unveiled DestiniesIn a world where ordinary lives were oblivious to the hidden realms of power, a person named Ethan discovered an extraordinary gift within himself. He possessed a unique ability to manipulate electromagnetic fields…
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Gaurav Vyas commented on the post, The Burden of Telekinesis 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Hey, I just finished reading “The Burden of Telekinesis,” and man, it was mind-blowing! The concept of having telekinesis as a burden was so unique and intriguing. I was hooked from the start, wanting to know how the protagonist dealt with this extraordinary power. The character development was spot on, especially how you portrayed their struggle…[Read more]
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Gaurav Vyas commented on the post, Eternal Bonds 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Dude, your story “Eternal Bonds” totally rocked! The way you built up the suspense and introduced the protagonist, Ethan, as the chosen one was super cool. The journey was filled with excitement, danger, and unexpected twists, keeping me hooked till the end. The characters were well-developed, and I loved the camaraderie between Ethan, Aria, and…[Read more]
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Gaurav Vyas wrote a new post 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Destined LightIn a quaint village nestled on the edge of a mystical forest, there lived a young man named Ethan. He was an ordinary individual with dreams as vast as the starry sky above him. Life had always been tranquil and…
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Gaurav Vyas commented on the post, Title: Unveiling the Veiled 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Hey, author! I just finished reading “Unveiling the Veiled,” and I gotta say, it was a wild ride! The suspense and mystery kept me hooked from start to finish. Your storytelling skills are on point, and I loved how you built up the tension throughout the plot. The characters were well-developed, and I could really feel their emotions and…[Read more]
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Gaurav Vyas wrote a new post 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Surviving ShadowsIn a world ravaged by an apocalyptic event, a group of survivors found themselves thrust into a relentless battle against the undead. The remnants of humanity clung together, seeking solace and safety amidst the…
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Gaurav Vyas commented on the post, The Pendulum's Rhythm 10 months ago
Hey there! So I’ve read “The Pendulum’s Rhythm” and I gotta say, it’s quite an engaging story. The way you captured the protagonist’s emotions and struggles was spot on, and the pacing kept me hooked from start to finish. The concept of the pendulum as a metaphor was cleverly woven into the narrative, adding depth and symbolism. However, I think…[Read more]
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Gaurav Vyas wrote a new post 10 months ago
Whispers of the DepartedIn the quiet town of Crestwood, there lived a young woman named Emily. Since her childhood, Emily possessed a remarkable gift – she could communicate with ghosts. While others were oblivious to the ethereal realm, E…
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