Bhumigarh a cursed village where no outsiders dared to enter…..

The villagers believed that the beautiful girls are the witches and specially if any girl coming out of the village,  is surely the Queen of the Witches Empire/ world. Even of they had any beautiful girl in their village,  the used to kill her by burning her alive. They believed that doing this will prevent them from the witches entering their village and from the Blackmagics done by those witches.

But actually the village was cursed by Queen Rani Rupvati 100 years back and the curse is back with an extreme impact.

Rani Rupvati was the first and  only wife of the King Raja Surya Pratap.  He was one of the kindest, innocent and helpful nature king ruling the village Bhumigarh whereas Rani Rupvati was filled with pride and attitude of her beautiful youth . To maintain her physical and facial beauty, she used to take bath with pure milk and rose petals .

She used to get jealous if she finds any beautiful girl in the village. She thought of killing them but she had got no reasons to accuse them and punish them with death. 

              One evening when Rani Rupvati was doing puja, she overheard somebody talking about Blackmagic through which a person  can retain his or her physical and facial beauty forever .

        There Rani Rupvati got an idea to remove her obstacles I.E. the good looking girls of the village and also the retain her gorgeous beauty for ever.

   She started learning Blackmagic. A month passed, she neither opened the door nor come out of the room. She was continously going on chanting the mantras. Raja Surya Pratap alas tensed.

                      Suddenly one day, the sound coming from the room of charting mantras stopped. Raja Surya Pratap had lost all the hopes of getting back his and decided to leave the village along with the villagers as he thought maybe their is something evil power their because of which all these are happening. The day from when Rani Rupvati started charting evil mantras all opposite and worst thing started happening and day by days everything went more worsted. 

            When the sounds stopped coming from the room the king thought that the queen has died as she haven’t taken a sip of water from last one month. So Raja Surya Pratap decided to leave Bhumigarh.

              Preparation for leaving the village started. When suddenly Rani Rupvati comes out of her room with much more elegance of her youth. Raha Surya Pratap wad happy that his wife is back safely but he also shocked… How come  a person be alive for a month without having a single sip of water that also with such beauty and elegancy. He was only think all these when Rani Rupvati said “U guys might be think how come I am alive with such beauty without any wrinkles”. Then said it’s all because of the prayers and ritual I performed… but one last ritual is left I.e I have to a human slaughter. Raja Surya Pratap remained shocked.

      He came to know Rani Rupvati’s intension… that she is going to slaughter him for her Blackmagic to get successful. 

          He tried to leave the place… but automatically all the doors closed. Rani Rupvati dragged him up to the place where she did all her rituals. She drag him to the river side and tied him up. Rani Rupvati was about to burn Raja Surya Pratap alive when all the villagers gathered there. They tried to stop her…..but they failed. 

Rani Rupvati succeed in killing Raja Surya Pratap and go immense power of the Blackmagics. All the villagers went aggressive when Raja Surya Pratap pulled Rani Rupvati along to the fire. So that she cannot harm his people but before dieing Rani Rupvati gave a curse to the village and she said she will be back soon…..

            WAIT FOR THE SECOND PART 

Responses

  1. Ayushi Jain

    Hey there! I checked out “The Return of Curse – Part 1” on Storieo. Overall, it’s an intriguing story with a lot of potential. The concept of a cursed village and a power-hungry queen is captivating, and the suspense builds up nicely. However, I think there are some areas where you can improve. The pacing feels a bit rushed, and it would be great to see more development of the characters and their motivations. Additionally, some parts could benefit from more descriptive language to enhance the atmosphere and immerse the readers in the setting. Keep up the good work and I’m excited to see how the story unfolds in Part 2!