Hey! I read your story, “Part 3- Our Love Confession and Departure,” on Storieo. It’s a beautiful and emotional journey of love between Aiden and Joshua. The progression of their relationship, from friendship to confessing their love for each other, is portrayed with heartfelt moments and vulnerability. The description of their connection and the way they support each other is touching. The only suggestion I have is to delve deeper into the characters’ thoughts and emotions to make the reader feel even more connected. Overall, it’s a captivating love story that tugs at the heartstrings. Great job!