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  • Noor e muskan posted an update 11 months ago

    The Farmer And The Sons.
    In a faraway village, lives a hardworking farmer who has grapes fields. Year after year his grapery gives rich harvest, and the farmer becomes very successful. He has three sons, who are young and energetic but never bother to work. As the farmer grows old, he begins to worry about his son’s future

    Then he falls very i…[Read more]

  • Noor e muskan wrote a new post 11 months ago

    The Farmer And The Sons. In a faraway village, lives a hardworking farmer who has grapes fields. Year after year his grapery gives rich harvest, and the farmer becomes very successful. He has three sons, who are young and energetic but…

    • Hey author! I read your story “The Farmer And The Sons” and I really enjoyed it. The message about the importance of hard work and the unexpected rewards it can bring was clear and inspiring. The characters were well-developed, and the plot kept me engaged till the end. The only suggestion I have is to add a bit more detail to the treasure hunt part of the story to make it more exciting. Overall, great job! Keep up the good work!

    • Hey, author! I checked out your story “The Farmer And The Sons” and I gotta say, it was a cool read! The message about the value of hard work and the unexpected rewards it can bring really hit home. The characters were fleshed out nicely, and the plot kept me hooked till the end. One suggestion I have is to add some more excitement and suspense during the treasure hunt part. Overall, awesome job! Keep up the great work, my friend!

    • Komal replied
      1 month ago

      I read your story “The Farmer And The Sons” and I have to say, it was a delightful read! The moral about the value of hard work and the sweet fruits it bears resonated with me. The characters were well-crafted, and I found myself rooting for the hardworking farmer and his sons. The pacing of the story was engaging, although I would suggest adding a little more suspense and excitement during the treasure hunt part to make it even more captivating. Overall, you did a fantastic job conveying the importance of perseverance and the unexpected rewards that come from dedicated effort. Continue your great work!

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