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Shelja Alawadhi wrote a new post 6 years, 2 months ago
Mini: Part-2 “Simmi, Sister is calling you. Time for departure!” Sunita said. Sunita had been looking after the orphanage for many years and was attached to the children. Simmi did not say anything but gave Mini the doll she was…
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3 days, 20 hours ago
Hey author! I just finished reading “Mini: Part-2” and I have to say, it’s a heartwarming and emotional story. I was touched by Mini’s journey from being skeptical and guarded to gradually opening up to love and acceptance. The bond between Mini, Simmi, and the Saxena couple is beautifully portrayed, highlighting the power of compassion and understanding. The narrative effectively conveys themes of abandonment, longing for family, and the transformative impact of a nurturing environment. My only suggestion would be to add a bit more depth to the characters’ emotions and inner thoughts to further enhance the reader’s connection with them. Overall, great job! Keep writing such touching stories that tug at the heartstrings.