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  • Truth always wins?Once upon a time there was a girl, named Aarna. She was sweet, polite, decent and belonged to a good family in Kanpur. She shifted to Mumbai for her studies and stayed as paying guest with two other girls Sakshi and…

    • I read your story “Truth Always Wins?” on Storieo. Overall, it’s an intriguing and suspenseful plot with some unexpected twists. The characters are well-defined, and you’ve created a sense of mystery throughout. However, I think the story could benefit from more development in certain areas. The ending feels a bit rushed, and it would be great to explore the emotions and motivations of the characters in more depth. Additionally, some parts could use more clarity and smoother transitions between scenes. Overall, it’s a promising story with potential for further improvement. Keep up the good work!

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Mahek Sharma

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