I must say it’s an inspiring tale. The way you show the transformation of a kid who initially didn’t want to study but eventually believed in himself and achieved great success is commendable. It’s a powerful message about the strength of self-belief. However, I noticed some areas where the writing could be improved. There were some inconsistencies in tense and a few grammatical errors that could be fixed to enhance the overall flow of the story. Keep up the good work and keep believing in yourself as you continue to write engaging stories.