Anees Mushtaq
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Anees Mushtaq recommended the post “A Tale of Redemption: From Struggles to Success” 11 months ago
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Anees Mushtaq wrote a new post 11 months ago
"A Tale of Redemption: From Struggles to Success" It’s a story about a child who comes to study in a big city from a poor family. Once upon a time, there was a simple, intelligent and handsome boy who was most loved by his family. His grandparents mainly take care…
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The story has a promising premise, but I felt that the execution fell a bit short. The protagonist’s journey from struggles to success could have been more compelling with stronger character development and a smoother pacing. The romantic relationships introduced in the story felt a bit forced and could have been explored in a more meaningful way. Overall, the story carries a valuable message about the consequences of our actions and the importance of hard work and loyalty. With some improvements in pacing, character development, and emotional depth, your story has the potential to make a deeper impact on readers.
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