On that starry night, I was sitting with my legs submerged in the cool water on the banks of the serene lake. Lost in my own thoughts, I gazed at my reflection in the water, pondering over what I was and what I could have been if only circumstances had been different. Little did I know that an unexpected conversation was about to unfold.
“You aren’t happy with your life, are you?” I flinched, turning abruptly to see who had spoken. To my surprise, it was my own reflection, sitting quietly beside me, staring up at the vast expanse of the night sky as I contemplated.
I sighed, “I never wanted my life to turn out like this. I had dreams, hopes, and aspirations of my own. But now, it feels as if my life has come to a standstill, confined within the boundaries of my duties and responsibilities. This managing post may be what others desire, but for me, it’s merely a means to make a living,” I said with dreary voice.
“So, what did you want to be, and why didn’t you pursue that path?” Questioned my reflection.
I mustered a brief smirk and replied, “It’s easy to say, isn’t it? But who said I didn’t try?” I gazed up at the starry sky as images seemed to form in the air. ” I always loved reading books and writing stories. I even secretly, against the wishes of those around me, indulged in reading books and crafting my own stories. I once fought against them to have a chance to bring my creations in the eyes of the world. I went there, worked hard but failed. Before I could continue came crashing upon me, my responsibilities and duties for my family. The burden of which made me live up to making a living and taking care of my people, leaving past my desires, what they called a childish greed.’ My voice chocked as I began tearing.
‘I always wished being the main character, having the perfect life, like the heroes. They get everything they want may it be a battle, love or just a dream of who they want to be, all of it gets fulfilled. If only my life would be just a little like that. But, I couldn’t be that. I couldn’t be any of it.’ I sobbed uncontrollably, and my reflection gently leaned in putting my head slowly on her shoulder as I cried my heart out.
In that vulnerable moment, my reflection spoke again, her voice filled with a glimmer of hope. “Do you want to see something?” she asked, smiling warmly. She began roving her hand gracefully around the lake as a shimmering light followed along and I watched with my eyes wide open. With her hand moving over the water’s surface, astonishingly she transformed the water into various shapes—a star, a horse, a butterfly, and even clouds. The water’s magical display fascinated me, and the shimmering figures began to move, as the water gradually glittered them. They all danced sparkling in harmony. Lost in the enchantment, I was caught off guard as the water splashed playfully onto my face. Startled, I turned to her, my expression a mixture of surprise and mild annoyance. In retaliation, I splashed water back at her, and we engaged in a playful water fight, laughing and dodging each other’s attacks.
Then, she held my hands, pulling me up from my seated position. Together, we sat on the back of the water horse, riding and gliding across the surface, delighting in the joy of the moment. I released my hands into the flowing water, feeling its gentle current as we sailed away into the distance.
‘Wasn’t it fun!’ she claimed as we sat back after the long cruise with heavy breathes, laughingly, I agreed.
I was still lost rewinding the moment when she asked softly, “Do you remember what you said just before you met me? About what you were and what you could be?”
Confused, I replied, “Yes, I remember. But what does that have to do with anything?” With a knowing look, she pointed towards my heart. “Your dream is still alive right here. Whenever you look at yourself in the mirror or in your reflection, you strive to see the person you wish to be, before reality sets in,” she explained.
Perplexed, I tried to comprehend her words. She continued, “But look at what you’ve discovered—a secret world that no one else knows. You got to be the human who has entered a fictional realm, just like the heroes you admired. Doesn’t that make you the main character?”
Her words struck a chord within me, and I slowly began to understand her perspective. ‘A normal life with all good things and no problems never makes a story.’ she expounded, ‘You were able to see me and all of this only because of your desires, to be something you are not. Heroes never have a perfect life; they make it one. Success and-’
‘Oh no, not again!’ I interjected appallingly, ‘success, hard work, failing, I have heard it all a billion times, but it never works and yet I was willing to do it all, I just never got a chance.’
Adroitly she said the adage,
‘TOUGH AS IT SEEMS,
BEAUTIFUL IS THE END;
DO MORE OF WHAT YOU LOVE,
BECAUSE ONLY ONE LIFE
IS WHAT YOU GET.’
Undeterred, she imparted her wisdom, “Paths will unravel once you take the first step. Obstacles will undoubtedly arise as you progress, but don’t let them halt your journey. In the end, what you’ll gain won’t be something you can touch, see, or hear—it will be something you’ll feel. A feeling of happiness, satisfaction, and liveliness. And that will be the most beautiful thing you will ever experience.”
She turned towards me; her gaze filled with earnestness. I was completely submerged in its thoughts when I suddenly heard her ask, “Will you?”
Gathering my resolve, I responded with gratitude and determination, “I will.” She nodded with contentment, then slowly turned her head, fixating her gaze on the rippling water. I followed suit, peering into my own reflection, feeling a newfound sense of companionship and strength. “I will,” I reaffirmed to my reflection, cast upon the water’s surface. I turned around, half-expecting to find her there, but she had vanished. Yet, this time, I didn’t feel lonely. Certainly, because I had myself with me. I had found a spark of new hope, unfolding an unfulfilled dream within. As I realised it all, with a smile, I looked back at my reflection in the lake, and it smiled back at me.
Review: This story is a beautifully crafted story that celebrates the human spirit’s resilience and the pursuit of personal fulfillment.The tale serves as a gentle reminder that dreams are worth pursuing, and by acknowledging our deepest desires, we can unlock our true potential.
“On that starry night, the author takes us on a captivating journey of introspection, where dreams and reality intertwine in a conversation with their own reflection. The evocative description of the serene lake, coupled with the protagonist’s contemplations, sets the stage for a transformative encounter that will resonate with readers long after they finish reading. The dialogue between the protagonist and their reflection is thought-provoking, delving deep into themes of longing, sacrifice, and the pursuit of one’s true passions. The author masterfully captures the internal struggle of the protagonist, torn between their responsibilities and the desire for a different life. The poignant moment of vulnerability, where tears flow freely, tugs at the heartstrings and elicits empathy from readers. The introduction of the magical element, with the reflection demonstrating its power to shape water into shimmering figures, adds an enchanting twist to the narrative. The water fight and subsequent ride on the back of a water horse evoke a childlike sense of wonder and playfulness, reminding us of the importance of embracing the joys of life amidst the challenges.
The reflection’s words of wisdom serve as a turning point, inviting readers to question their own perceptions and aspirations. The message that one’s dreams and desires are never truly lost resonates strongly, offering a glimmer of hope and the motivation to pursue one’s passions despite life’s obstacles. The profound realization that being the main character in one’s own story requires the courage to shape one’s destiny strikes a chord with readers on a personal level. The prose flows smoothly, painted with vivid imagery that allows readers to immerse themselves in the protagonist’s world. The emotional depth and growth of the protagonist are palpable, creating a strong connection with the reader. The ending, with the protagonist finding solace and determination in their own reflection, leaves a lasting impact and a sense of empowerment. In “A Reflection of Hope and Self-Discovery,” the author skillfully weaves together elements of introspection, magic, and the pursuit of dreams to create a poignant and inspiring tale. This short story serves as a reminder to cherish our aspirations, embrace the journey, and find strength within ourselves to shape the story of our lives. Highly recommended for those seeking a heartwarming and thought-provoking read.”
The story is good I mean it is really worth to read . As I am reading in my mind i can imagine the character in story as me which show that this story really take your attention and make the reader what story is about , i really love the grammar in this story but I think word should be more simpler for this kind of self – identify story . Overall story was good
“Embracing the Reflection of Dreams Within” is a moving and inspiring narrative about the power of self-reflection and pursuing one’s aspirations. The title effectively captures the core subject of the story, setting the tone for an introspective and personal growth journey.
The story begins on a starry night, evoking awe and setting the stage for a spectacular and transforming encounter. The protagonist’s contact with their own mirror adds dimension to the story by representing the inner dialogue and self-discovery that occurs throughout the novel.
The author deftly communicates the protagonist’s sense of longing and unhappiness with their current situation, allowing readers to sympathize with their desire for something more meaningful.
The protagonist’s chat with their reflection is a moving and thought-provoking exchange. It dives into the protagonist’s previous ambitions and sacrifices, showing the universal problem of combining personal dreams with duties.
The integration of mystical aspects, such as water transformation and a joyful water fight, adds a fantasy and escapism element to the plot.
As the protagonist embraces their ambitions and commits to achieving their dreams, the novel closes with a powerful resolution. This conclusion leaves the reader with a sense of hope and inspiration, telling us that it is never too late to pursue our dreams and live the life we genuinely desire.
“Embracing the Reflection of Dreams Within” is a beautifully created story about self-discovery, hope, and the pursuit of dreams. The title captures the heart of the story brilliantly, and the writing style is interesting and vivid. Overall, this is an upbeat and inspiring narrative that encourages readers to consider their own aspirations and find the confidence to pursue them.
Pria! I amazed how simply the message is put. We often try to kill our dreams and desires for others. For our loved ones, thinking that we have our prior commitments, responsibilities and what not. But, we often forget that this is the only life we have. The qoute “love, live and laugh” hits me harder after reading your story. It isn’t just a clichéd line but a reality of lifr that the time is passing by and so is our opportunities to live life. Honestly, the story is ubiquitous and relatable.
Overall score :-
Story line – 8/10
Choice of words – 8/10
Impact – 9/10
The title “Embracing the reflection of the dreams within” is an astonishing peice of work by author and the wonderful self help story that i have ever read,
as its title explains about the story itself.
In this short story the author finds another expect of his life which he had never seen when his true reflection came over him.
The author tries to indicate that in the path of success difficulties will also arrive but we have to face our challenges rather than surrendering our dreams in fear. it
it can be hard in the beginning but with strong determination and continuous efforts one can be victorious.
The narration between him and her reflection is very impressive.
The Author tries to attribute the humanoid character to her reflection and shows her friend as well the teacher.its a true inspirational story from the heart of the author.
And the beast line is-
(she pointed towards my heart. “Your dream is still alive right here. Whenever you look at yourself in the mirror or in your reflection, you strive to see the person
you wish to be, before reality sets in,”) here the writer gives us morals about how one can find true self and the potential within, what he wants to be and what he actually is.
The writing was beautifully done and the storyline was very engaging. I was especially drawn to the main character’s struggles and how they were depicted. The addition of magical aspects made the story even more enchanting. Overall, the story had a powerful message about following your dreams and discovering your own inner strength. It was a touching and thought-provoking read that I would definitely suggest to others.