Once open a time there is a black lake near the road.After the evening no body want to cross the road ,because who will cross the road after the evening some things mysterious happen to them.They can’t explain to any one some people are dead,or some people have shocked……so the near by villagers can’t understand what happen there.They got scared and worried.

                                               One night a car passing road .Car have loud music.One Strong ,Tall and handsome man drive the car.He don’t know what next waiting for him.He drive very carefully,aware the animals.He is a villager too who went out to study.So he don’t know about this mysterious incident what happen to people who crossing the road at night…..Suddenly  some things happen to him,his car broke down.he can’t understand why the car suddenly stop.he try to start but it can’t work.he watching around him for help but its village outer and dark night too, so no body is there.He trying to open the car gate and want to check what happen to car.But     OOOHHHH       NOOOOO!!!

Car  gate is stuck,he can’t open it.Now he get little worried ,after few second his car get started and moving but its going back very fast .Suddenly car stop ,,,the man get out from the car and look around him and thing what happen to him .He saw a beautiful lake beside him he thought the lake is steel here ,suddenly he feel something,,,,,he feel someone is looking to him and he is next to him ,,,,sudden he turn but no body is there.And then someone push him to the lake,and he fall into the lake,he going deep in the water,he thing he going to DIE .but stuck with a big black bag ,he saw this very care fully some fingers stuck in this bag,it looks like a dead body in it.He get very scared and run away to the village he tell everyone what happen to him.Its morning now everyone going to the lake,and want to rescue the dead body .after few hours they get the body and trying to identify who’s body is this,sudden the man shout its PREETY his childhood friend his girl and future wife.He came to the village only for her.he want to find out what happen to PREETY.

                                                       Some one PRIEST come here says’One night she came near the lake and waiting for the man but suddenly a car cross her, some boys sit around the car and saw her alone,they made a bad plan,boys was drunk’they came to the PREETY and RAPED her,PREETY was alone she don’t escape,after that boys get scered so they kill her and put her into the bag and throw into the lake .That’s why PREETY is here after a long time,no body find her,and try to tell everyone what happen to her, now its time to free the soul,but the soul don’t want to free.She want revenge .The PRIEST SAYS ,”PREETY” help us to fids the guilty persons,suddenly PREETY’S soul make strong wind and then the bad boys started flying in the air.now the everyone know who is the murderer of PREETY. Then the wind has stoped bad boys fall down into the lake and they never get out and no body found the dead bodies.

THE REVENGE THE OVER NOW PREETY ‘S SOUL IS READY FREE.she said GOOD BYE to her man and said sorry for everyone.

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  1. Thenmozhi D

    REVENGE OF SOUL is a mystery-laced horror story which expresses the feeling of a poor girl (soul) who can’t reveal her pain and brutal death caused by some devilish monsters. Besides some grammatical mistakes, punctuation errors and wrongly spelt words, this story is quite frightening to read when you really imagine that’s happening in real. As some scary and spooky elements are missing in this story, yet a good end is given by the author.