Have you ever wondered, what would have happened if there was no such word as ‘why’?
There would have been endless curiosities and questions among people but no solution to it.
However, even in this era there are people around us who hesitates and are often
recognised as – introverts because they never really expose their thoughts. But, what are
their thoughts, actually?
One fine evening in the lasts of autumn, a delightful girl covered with a woollen scarf and
having her hands inside her sweater was walking by the riverside. Her name was Susie
which was not often recognised by her elementary school friends because of her introverted
nature. She always had this hesitation inside of her whenever she even tried talking to
somebody. Though, she made her closest friend throughout this phase which was Susie
herself. She often used to talk to herself and question things by challenging her mind but
after all, an echo of silence as an answer.
Susie that day sat by the hazed grass cliff alongside the river and stared at the beautiful
orange sky endlessly until she saw a hot air balloon passing by. She had a numb brain and
continuous stare on it. She asked herself, “ where do these hot air balloons even go? Or who
even blows them, man! That sounds tiring..” and ignored the thought for a white until she got
distracted by a voice again coming from that giant balloon asking for help and all scared.
Susie mutters and wonders, “I wonder how it feels like to end a scary and challenging task..”.
Susie started connecting things with her life and started questioning herself even more that
something might look challenging but when it ends it satisfies the most, although, she
mid-thought got called by her mom for dinner.
While walking back home, she saw white pores of pollens flying all around her which made
her tremendously happy but she wondered again, “Why do the wind has to be so rude and
destroy a pollen full grass like this!?” She gets frustrated and as she gets back home she
holds herself up and puts the character behind by asking her mom the same, her mother
smiles and replies, “everything happens for good Susie and the wind actually helps the
pollen”. Susie got her doubt clear but what her mother did not realise was Susie had a
flabbergasted impact of her words. Susie did not sleep that night and thought all night long
and connected everything she had experienced with – ‘happened for a reason huh?’.
Next morning, Susie was simply a new person. With a big smile on her face and questions
on her tongue instead of her brain. She figured maybe sometimes it is okay to let your
intrusive thoughts lose and let things go. Her family was happy with the change in her
behaviour and she made tons of friends in that one day only.
So, sometimes it is fine to ask, to put your thoughts before you, let yourself be satisfied and
be relaxed in that fine evening of autumn instead of having a questionnaire within.
For a reader, “Questannaire within” provides a compelling and sympathetic story. Susie, a character in the plot, battles with being an introvert and uncertain ideas. The idea of reflection and curiosity resonates, pushing readers to consider their own inner monologues. Susie’s progressive development, prompted by her consideration of life’s big questions, is both inspiring and relatable. Nature and ordinary experiences are used to provide dimension to the story. The theme of embracing inquiry and finding fulfilment is upbeat and inspires readers to embark on their own journey of self-discovery. Overall, “Questannaire Within” captivates the reader with its connection, thoughtful curiosity, and hopeful attitude.
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