I read “The Haunting Reflection” and it gave me chills! The atmosphere you created in the old farmhouse was wonderfully eerie, and the supernatural elements were captivating. The tension built up nicely, and I was genuinely curious about Lily’s fate. The climax had great intensity, and the resolution tied up the story well. My only suggestion would be to explore the characters’ emotions and reactions a bit more to make their experiences even more relatable and impactful. Overall, great job on creating a haunting and suspenseful tale! Keep up the good work!