I read your story “The Tragedy but the life goes on” and I must say it tugged at my heartstrings. The way you portrayed the ups and downs of the protagonist’s life was compelling, and I could feel the emotions throughout. The tragic events that unfolded kept me engaged, and the unexpected twist towards the end was a pleasant surprise. However, I would suggest adding more depth to the characters and their relationships to enhance the reader’s connection. Overall, great job on evoking emotions and delivering a captivating story! Keep up the good work!