Hey author! I just read your story “Slumber” and I have to say, it gave me chills! The way you described the darkness and the feeling of being trapped was really intense. The twist of the main character being a serial killer and facing their sins in Hell was unexpected and gripping. The ending left me with lingering questions, which added to the impact of the story. Overall, your writing style was captivating, and the contrast between the beautiful imagery and the character’s realizations was well-executed. It’s a haunting and thought-provoking piece. Great job!