Why this lehnga is so heavy , mom how am I looking? , Masi jist nodded. Oh hi my name is Riya and this is my story ,,
Today is my wedding but i m just 22 i recently completed my Btech degree from DTU Delhi in computer science even i didn’t took my degree yet , even i have my job first day just after 10 days of my marriage. I belongs to very small town in madhya pradesh and as per my father promise to his friend that once I reached adulthood he marry me to his son or my wanna be husband Raj Verma , infact he wants to marry me to this guy when I was 18 but my mother and my jee main marks are a very good saviour but unfortunately my mother died during a accident when I was just 21 , i was in third year of my college suddenly my father called me and said that i wanted to see my mom so i can come the last time , i was very much depressed even at that time everything was ruined
Story feels real but broken and unfinished. Little grammatical errors here and there. It feels like a narrative scattered all over. Could have been presented more beautifully.