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Comeback 

Written by

Kanishk Raj Bhalki

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The sky was dark, and the moon was the only source of light. John lay on the ground, his body battered and bruised. He had just lost the biggest boxing match of his life, and his dreams of becoming a champion were shattered. Tears streamed down his face, as he thought about all the hard work he had put in.

For months, John felt like he was in a deep hole. Every time he thought about his failure, he felt like giving up. But one day, he woke up with a renewed sense of determination. He realized that failure was not the end, and that he could use it as fuel to come back stronger.

John began to train harder than ever before. He spent long hours in the gym, perfecting his technique and building his strength. His perseverance paid off, and he was soon ready to step back into the ring.

But life had other plans for him. Just when he thought everything was going well, he faced another setback. He injured his shoulder during a training session, and the doctors told him that he wouldn’t be able to box again. It was a devastating blow for him, and he felt like giving up once again.

But John refused to let this defeat him. He underwent surgery and started a rigorous physical therapy program. He worked tirelessly, day and night, and finally, the day of his comeback fight arrived.

As he stepped into the ring, John felt a sense of calm wash over him. He knew that he had done everything he could to prepare for this moment. And no matter what the outcome, he would come back, stronger than ever before.

And come back, he did. John won the fight and went on to become a champion. He learned that failure was not something to be feared, but something to be embraced. It was a lesson that stayed with him for the rest of his life.

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4 responses to “Comeback ”

  1. CHETAN Avatar
    CHETAN

    A short story by Mr kanishk raj bhalki can be considered as tea time story for quick motivation its starts as-
    The story of John, the boxer who overcomes failure and adversity to become a champion, is an inspiring one. It teaches us that failure is not the end, but rather a stepping stone to success. If we are willing to work hard and never give up, we can achieve anything we set our minds to.

    The story is well-written and engaging. The characters are well-developed and relatable, and the plot is full of twists and turns that keep the reader guessing. The ending is satisfying and inspiring, leaving the reader feeling hopeful and motivated.

    Overall, the story is a great example of how to write a successful comeback story. It is inspiring, well-written, and engaging. I would recommend it to anyone who is looking for a story that will motivate them to never give up on their dreams.

    Here are some specific things that I liked about the story:

    The character of John is well-developed and relatable. We can see how he is affected by his failures, but we also see his determination and his willingness to never give up.
    The plot is full of twists and turns that keep the reader guessing. We never know what is going to happen next, which keeps the story exciting.
    The ending is satisfying and inspiring. It leaves the reader feeling hopeful and motivated.
    I would definitely recommend this story to anyone who is looking for a good read. It is an inspiring story that will motivate you to never give up on your dreams.

  2. 04 Rahul Barui Avatar
    04 Rahul Barui

    In this captivating story of grit and determination, the protagonist, John, embarks on a turbulent journey from the depths of defeat to the pinnacle of triumph. The vivid imagery of a dark sky and the moon as the sole source of light sets the tone for the emotional rollercoaster that unfolds.

    The narrative beautifully depicts the despair that engulfs John after his devastating loss, only to be uplifted by a newfound determination to rise above his failures. The author adeptly portrays the power of resilience as John immerses himself in rigorous training, refusing to succumb to self-doubt.

    However, life throws another curveball, threatening to extinguish John’s dreams once more. The portrayal of his injury and subsequent resilience during the arduous recovery process is truly inspiring. Readers are reminded that setbacks can be stepping stones to greatness, and that one’s response to adversity determines their ultimate success.

    The climactic comeback fight evokes a sense of anticipation and showcases John’s unwavering spirit. As he triumphs against all odds, the story encapsulates the invaluable life lesson that failure is not the end but a catalyst for personal growth and achievement.

    This tale of resilience and redemption leaves a lasting impression, reminding readers that the strength to overcome obstacles resides within us all.

    The only negative attribute about such tales is the overuse of “boxing comeback” story arcs. This makes the chronical quite predictable. Makes it feel like just another tale of triumph over adversity.
    Let me guess: our hero faces defeat, finds new determination, trains hard, overcomes obstacles, and emerges victorious. It’s like a predictable recipe for success, sprinkled with clichés and inspirational quotes.

    Don’t get me wrong, it is a good story but maybe its time for some new refreshing twists.

  3. Nivedita Avatar
    Nivedita

    “COMEBACK” is a soul stirring story showcasing determination and sheer will power of a human being who overcomes the obstacles in his life and emerges victorious. The story takes us through the poignant journey of John, an aspiring boxing champion who overcomes seemingly implausible situations to become the boxing champion.

    The author adeptly portrays John’s devastation at his broken dreams by drawing comparison with the dark, starless sky. However, just as the moon was the only source of light in the sky, a ray of determination in his heart compelled him to work harder for his dream. Tragedy strikes when he least expected it; he injured his shoulder during a training session and doctors declared it impossible for him to return to the sport. It is his undaunting spirit and perseverance that he not only returns to the sport, but returns in a remarkable manner by becoming the boxing champion.

    COMEBACK is a story that deeply resonates with everybody. It is a reminder that setbacks are a part and parcel of life. One must not be intimidated by challenges, instead convert an adversity into an opportunity. John’s journey contains a powerful message of embracing difficulties in one’s life and triumph over them. This tale will leave the readers feeling inspired and with a belief that we can overcome even the greatest of obstacles with determination.
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  4. Tasha sharma Avatar
    Tasha sharma

    The message behind the story is excellent, however, it could have been portrayed in a much more exciting manner. The use of vivid imagery could have been implied. Building a sense of suspense during his recovery from the surgery and constructing words in a way that showed just how deeply he suffered his loss and worked towards it would have made this story a hit. A good effort overall, but working towards the points mentioned would really enhance the essence of the story.

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